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(Howl into my ear;
give me your claws.
I want the animal in you;

in you I shall nest.)

Take your clothes off, take them off for me.
Let me see the scars and the marks,
those dark moles and faint sun spots.

I want to memorize the way your fur grows.
I want to tickle my cheeks with your goose bumps.
Let me count the bruises and the cuts.

I'll bless them with names;
I'll lick away the blood stains.
We can lie skin to skin for days.

I have enough kisses for your brows and lashes,
for nails, teeth and toes, for thighs and knees;
in your curves and dents I'll nuzzle my nose.

Let me see your skin dance.
Through and around; your every breath performs,
through and around, an ancient holy chant.

I don't want your dreams; forget the ifs and the maybes.
All those regrets you carry are nothing but sad stories.
You don't have to utter a single word;

your body holds all the promises.
Don't tell me any secrets, hold your confessions;
just take your clothes off, take them off for me.

© 2012 melekelif
raw and rough


© 2012 melekelif
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Given 2012-12-02
the animal by *yesilm ( Suggested by L0NE-W0lf and Featured by thorns )
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LilMijou Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Loved it
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thanks. :sun:
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:iconvmenfangirl:
VMenFangirl Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!!! :iconbravoplz:
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you. :sun:
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:iconvmenfangirl:
VMenFangirl Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you´re welcome! :D :meow::iconholaplz:
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:iconsonefire:
sonefire Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you did a magnifficent job on that,
keep up the good work, :)
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thanks. :bow:
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:iconsonefire:
sonefire Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :clap:
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:iconchip667:
chip667 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is good. Gave me chills. lol :) Keep up the good work!!
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you. :)
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:iconchip667:
chip667 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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:iconkageaki:
Kageaki Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
nice lines
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you.
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:iconlupawolf87:
lupawolf87 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012   General Artist
Beautiful, this gave me chills.
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you.
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:iconsuperfanloveraxl:
SuperFanLoveraxl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Gorgeous work~! :iconwoootplz:

How do you do it~?
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
i believe the question is a rhetorical one, no? if not, i don't have a proper answer i'm afraid.
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:iconsuperfanloveraxl:
SuperFanLoveraxl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Both yes, and no~!^^ XD
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
:bow:
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:iconsuperfanloveraxl:
SuperFanLoveraxl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
:iconhappyxplz: Still love it~!^^ XD
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sephirosu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gorgeous poem. The only thing that took me out of it was all those lower case "I"s dotted around. Finicky brain.
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
the dots are gone. ;)
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
i have issues with capitalizing. i rarely do it unless it is formal writing. sometimes i go back to make it all proper and nice, but only sometimes. :) thank you.
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:iconjashinsangel:
JashinsAngel Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This perfectly conveys how I feel inside.
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you for the comment.
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magdalenamariposa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
nice but i'd rather long for human soul over animalistic quality... seems too base to be true love and a little too cliché to be poetic. but, to each his own i guess :)
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you for the comment. :)
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
wow, it is "raw and rough"
nicely done
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
:bow:
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xblackxbloodxrosex Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its a dark and sexy poem that reads as such but tells more than what is written in words. It tells a story and makes a request. Amazing!!!!
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you very much.
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Catmicas Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
reallly good

"howl into my ear;
give me your claws.
i want the animal in you"
"let me see the scars and the marks" sooo coool
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thanks.
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:icongothinha:
Gothinha Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Made me shiver! Amazing work :D
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Thank you. :)
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:iconnykol-haebrd:
nykol-haebrd Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice piece of writing here :)
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Thanks. :)
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:iconnykol-haebrd:
nykol-haebrd Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob ^_^
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:iconcoriacea:
Coriacea Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Mmm, that's good stuff, kiddo. Congrats on the DD!
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconcoriacea:
Coriacea Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're incredibly welcome.
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:iconpandpuffs:
Pandpuffs Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Wow...impressive.
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
thank you. :bow:
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Thank you. I wish thee a good week. :sun:
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, you too :happybounce:
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a7xerfoREVer Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
let me count the bruises and the cuts / i'll bless them with names
eep. love this thing so much, well-deserved dd. (:
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
thank you very much :)
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:iconbrassteeth:
brassteeth Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
"let me see your skin dance"
Wonderful. Congratulations on your D.D!!
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:iconyesilm:
yesilm Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
thanks :)
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